i18n(fr): revise every page into modern journalistic French - #40
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The French edition read as translated English: invented words (dégratuité, factive, déterministement), agreement errors, calques that do not parse (« nous prendre la main », « par jambe », « à échec fermé »), raw anglicisms, and not one non-breaking space in the whole edition. This is a language pass, not a rewrite — meaning, numbers, links, and the FR-9 honest framing are unchanged against the English source. - one vocabulary across all pages: garde-fous (rails), verrou (gate), liste blanche (allowlist), plateforme (venue), référence (benchmark), frais de preneur (taker fee), surapprentissage (overfitting), glissement (slippage), examen par des savants (scholarly review) - French typography: U+00A0 before : ; ? ! % $, inside « », and in figures; dates in French form (le 20 août 2026, not 2026-08-20) - ui.ts: `news.comments` said « 0 commentaires »; zéro takes the singular, and the empty case now reads « Aucun commentaire » - install.ts: the Windows path rendered as C:\\Users\\<vous>\\keel — over-escaped against the English source, now C:\Users\<vous>\keel - engine-docs.manifest.json: the fr section labels and doc blurbs - inline locale === "fr" labels in src/components/** Refs #35 Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_013cpLPLRD6Mvv4KkyVDbnZn
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PR #40 merged the French revision first, so all four conflicts landed in the French blocks: the new French prose against the three cross-cutting fixes this branch had made there. Every conflict resolves in favour of the new French. The three consistency fixes are then re-applied on top, because #40 reintroduced them: - home.ts — the French <title> capitalised the brand again ("Keel : le moteur …"). Lowercased, keeping the French no-break space before the colon. - home.ts — the PBO/CSCV expansion was dropped. Restored on the new wording. - install.ts, features.ts — "TRAIN MORE" for the CLI literal, which is TRAIN-MORE. Revisions reconciled so no page shows a spurious stale banner: home fr and community fr now carry translatedFromRev equal to their English rev. Verified across all nine pages — every ar and fr translatedFromRev matches its en rev. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01EURzVpngXDN1dk9c5FMFhW
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Closes #35.
The French edition shipped on every site-map page, but a read-through against
the English source turned up real defects: invented words, agreement errors,
calques that do not parse as French, raw anglicisms, and not one non-breaking
space in the whole edition.
This is a language pass, not a rewrite. Meaning, structure, numbers, links,
and the FR-9 honest framing are unchanged against the English source; the diff
touches French strings only.
Invented or broken words
about.tsfeatures.tshome.tsGrammar, including two inverted negations
features.ts— «un pool d'échantillons corrélées» →corrélés.compare.ts— «keel vient de lancer» → «keel vient tout juste d'être lancé».about.ts— «ou faire lire par quelqu'un» → «ou la faire lire à quelqu'un»; «publier, voter et poser des questions vivent sur GitHub» rebuilt.compliance.ts— «Ce n'est pas une fatwa et il ne peut pas en produire» (pronoun flip); «Purification et la forme spot uniquement» (heading articles).install.ts— «installe le même moteur … sur aucune plateforme» said the opposite of EN's "on any platform". Now «quelle que soit la plateforme».install.ts— «keel n'a les moyens ni de l'un ni de l'autre» had no antecedent, because the French had dropped the two platforms the English names. Rebuilt cataphorically.Mistranslations
features.ts— «le lien est là pour nous prendre la main». EN is "the link is how you catch us" — the French said the opposite of holding us to account. Now «c'est par ce lien que vous nous prendriez en défaut».features.ts— thin order books as «carnets fins» → «carnet d'ordres peu liquide».about.ts— «l'épine structurelle d'un navire» → «la colonne vertébrale»; «trade sous le ticker KEEL» → «est cotée sous le symbole KEEL»; «rien ici sur quoi vous revendre de la performance» → «aucune performance à vous vendre».home.ts— «~1,2 % par jambe» (calque of "per leg") → «par sens».compare.ts— «Alpaca est câblé» → «intégré»; «son flux TradingView d'abord» → «sa logique centrée sur TradingView»; «horloges conscientes des sessions» → «qui tiennent compte des séances»; «communautés ordres de grandeur plus grandes» → «sans commune mesure»; «Intégrée nulle part» → «Non intégrée».community.ts— «il lit et il lie» ("lier" is to tie) → «il lit et il renvoie».compliance.ts— «questions de fait-plus-érudition sur le monde» (untranslated compound); «soldes oisifs» → «soldes dormants»; «Sources premières» → «Sources primaires».docs.ts— «un second tableau dériverait» read as "would be derived"; EN means "would drift" → «se désynchroniserait».news.ts— «lues des Discussions GitHub» → «lues depuis»; «Le projet s'annonce» → «publie ses annonces».install.ts— «N'installez jamais par nom nu» → «par son seul nom»; «passe-droit SmartScreen» → «exemption».One vocabulary across all pages
Retired: «par design» (the site already used «par conception» elsewhere), «le
crypto», and raw
pool/edge/exchanges/long-only/prop.Typography
The edition had zero non-breaking spaces. U+00A0 now sits before
: ; ? ! % $, inside« », and in figures (3 000,899 $,~53 k) — without it abrowser can leave a colon or a closing guillemet alone at the start of a line.
Dates take the French form:
le 20 août 2026, not2026-08-20.Applied by a scanner that rewrites string-literal contents only, so the
ternaries and URLs in the French regions are untouched.
Two real bugs, not just wording
ui.ts—news.commentsrendered «0 commentaires». In French zéro takes thesingular; the empty case now reads «Aucun commentaire».
install.ts— the Windows path was over-escaped toC:\\Users\\<vous>\\keeland rendered with doubled backslashes. The English is
C:\Users\<you>\keel.Also covered
engine-docs.manifest.json— thefrsection labels and doc blurbs that feeddata/docs-meta.json.locale === "fr"labels insrc/components/**(Header.astro,ForOperators.astro,DocsIndexPage.astro).Verification
npm run check→ 0 errors.npm run build→ 41 pages built, complete.translatedFromRevvalues untouched — the English did not move.Note for the Arabic branch
mainmoved two merges past the commiti18n/ar-msa-revisionwas cut from(#32, #33): the stochastic-modelling paragraph on the home page and the
paper-first sections on install/features. The French for those is revised here;
the Arabic for them is not yet.
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