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13-softwares.md #3116
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| When you download an rpm binary package from an unknown website or untrusted location, you do not know whether it has been tampered with. Therefore, users need to verify the software package's signature to ensure the downloaded package is complete and free of tampering. | ||
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| Before performing signature verification on the software package, it is necessary to import the required public key in advance (this operation is usually carried out by the system administrator). | ||
| Before performing signature verification on the software package, the required public key must be imported in advance (this is usually done by the system administrator). |
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The "must be imported" is passive voice. How about "Import the required public key before performing signature verification on the software package.
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The "must be imported" is passive voice. How about "Import the required public key before performing signature verification on the software package.
I'll go ahead and edit this here and then merge. Thanks @gannazhyrnova !
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Other than the one item mentioned, I don't see anything wrong with these corrections. Thank you @gannazhyrnova. If you want me to just make that change, let me know.
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