gnrc_gomach: add a brief description of GoMacH's features. by zhuoshuguo · Pull Request #8281 · RIOT-OS/RIOT

zhuoshuguo · 2017-12-19T09:49:28Z

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This PR adds a brief description of GoMacH's main features.

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See also #5618 .

miri64 · 2017-12-19T10:03:48Z

 * @ingroup     net_gnrc
- * @brief       A traffic adaptive MAC protocol that provides high traffic
- *              adaptability, high energy efficiency and high robustness.
+ * @brief       GoMacH is, we believe, "a General, nearly Optimal MAC protocol


Do we believie it or know it. Anyway this , we believe, should be removed IMHO.

miri64 · 2017-12-19T10:04:07Z

- * @brief       A traffic adaptive MAC protocol that provides high traffic
- *              adaptability, high energy efficiency and high robustness.
+ * @brief       GoMacH is, we believe, "a General, nearly Optimal MAC protocol
+ *              for multi-Hop communications", for IEEE 802.15.4 IoT/WSNs networks.


miri64 · 2017-12-19T10:05:22Z

+ * 3. it adopts duty-cycle scheme to conserve power;
+ * 4. it provides high traffic adaptation for handling burst or dynamic traffics.
+ *    It achieves this by dynamically allocating transmission slots for intensive
+ *    senders (that have pending packets); it enables a (or several) sender


one (or more) sender(s)

miri64 · 2017-12-19T10:05:43Z

+ *    senders (that have pending packets); it enables a (or several) sender
+ *    to burst transmit all of its buffered packets (for the same destination) to
+ *    the receiver in one shot (or during a shot notice); The burst slotted-transmissions
+ *    (of multi senders) will be ordered by the receiver device in a TDMA period;


multiple senders

miri64 · 2017-12-19T10:06:02Z

+ *    to burst transmit all of its buffered packets (for the same destination) to
+ *    the receiver in one shot (or during a shot notice); The burst slotted-transmissions
+ *    (of multi senders) will be ordered by the receiver device in a TDMA period;
+ * 5. it adopts multi-channel scheme for avoiding/reducing wireless interference jam.


article missing.

miri64 · 2017-12-19T10:07:27Z

+ *              high traffic adaptability, high energy efficiency and high robustness.
+ *
+ * ## GoMacH's main features
+ * 1. it is an asynchronous solution which doesn't rely on global synchronization;


I think this whole list can be more paraphrased,

1. doesn't rely on global synchronization 2. support for multi-hop and mesh networks ....

miri64 · 2017-12-19T10:07:59Z

+ *              high traffic adaptability, high energy efficiency and high robustness.
+ *
+ * ## GoMacH's main features
+ * 1. it is an asynchronous solution which doesn't rely on global synchronization;


Also, why it is an enumerated list? These features do not appear to be in any particular order or priority.

zhuoshuguo · 2017-12-19T10:34:23Z

Addressed comments.

miri64 · 2017-12-19T10:37:08Z

+ *
+ * ## GoMacH's main features
+ * doesn't rely on global synchronization;
+ * supports for Multi-hop and mesh network;


Why is Multi-hop capitalized now?

Ah, my bad, mistakenly did it. fix soon

miri64 · 2017-12-19T10:37:34Z

+ *              high traffic adaptability, high energy efficiency and high robustness.
+ *
+ * ## GoMacH's main features
+ * doesn't rely on global synchronization;


Consider removing semi-colons and periods or decide for one of them.

zhuoshuguo · 2017-12-19T10:44:28Z

Addressed comments again~

miri64

Last change request, I promise ^^

miri64 · 2017-12-19T10:57:18Z

+ *              high traffic adaptability, high energy efficiency and high robustness.
+ *
+ * ## GoMacH's main features
+ * doesn't rely on global synchronization


mh... now it isn't a list anymore I just realized (the stars are just from the C-comment). Probably most readable to do it with dashes:

* - doesn't rely on global synchronization * - ...

zhuoshuguo · 2017-12-19T11:47:12Z

Addressed comments again~

zhuoshuguo · 2017-12-19T11:49:00Z

Will squash after ACK~

smlng · 2017-12-19T13:12:37Z

 * @ingroup     net_gnrc
- * @brief       A traffic adaptive MAC protocol that provides high traffic
- *              adaptability, high energy efficiency and high robustness.
+ * @brief       GoMacH is, "a General, nearly Optimal MAC protocol


sorry, but this is not brief, maybe the original defgroup description (A traffic-adaptive multi-channel MAC) can be (re) used here. Please note that the @brief sentence will be displayed in doxygen below the group name (GoMacH, here), hence it should be a one-liner. You can use this longer text as as the first paragraph of the detailed description (above the feature list), though.

to make my point a bit clearer, look at the module page in doxygen, the @brief for the boards group is for instance Board specific definitions and implementations.

@zhuoshuguo you can also look at the compiled doc locally by building with make doc in the RIOT root directory. The results will be in doc/doxygen/html/. Choose the module.html to look at the new version of the page @smlng mentioned.

(saw this comment only after ACKing)

miri64

ACK

zhuoshuguo · 2017-12-19T13:45:34Z

+ * @brief       GoMacH is, "a General, nearly Optimal MAC protocol
+ *              for multi-Hop communications", for IEEE 802.15.4 IoT/WSNs networks.
+ *              It is designed to be a traffic adaptive MAC protocol that provides
+ *              high traffic adaptability, high energy efficiency and high robustness.


@smlng But we have the removed description above texts displayed here~ :-)

Ah, you mean the description should be a one-liner, i.e., not longer than one line (like 2 or 3 lies)? @smlng @miri64

exactly, the text is fine, just add a one-liner for @brief and move these 2 sentences after that (2 empty lines) so its part of the longer description.

Thanks!~ Learned and work on it~ :-)

zhuoshuguo · 2017-12-19T13:58:42Z

Addressed comments and squashed!~

smlng · 2017-12-19T14:03:41Z

compiled docs, looks good!

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gnrc_lwmac: revise brief description. #8288

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