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…ve commited earler. new font added to header, portfolio page complete along with about page, until I plan to edit my words.
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Great job with this site Theresa! I really like the simple design and your index.html page is lovely. The CSS image slider on the hobbies page is especially cool.
I corrected typos, but if those don't bother you, then please feel free to ignore :) In terms of things to work on, DRYing up your CSS (and perhaps HTML as well) will help you target elements more specifically. I suggested a few things for accessibility purposes as well.
If you have questions please feel free to email me at laurenfriesbrink@gmail.com!
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| <h3><a>ABOUT ME</a></h3> |
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Where does this <a> tag lead to? Generally it's best practice to include an href with an a -- see Rule 10 here.
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(I see a few others like this as well, just FYI)
| I was accepted into Ada Developers Accademy, Cohort 7 in November 2016. Before applying, I taught myself some basice coding fundimentals all while continuing community college courses and working at least 3 odd jobs. | ||
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| When I'm not coding, you can expect me to be dancing or exploring the outdoors. I am an avid lindy hopper and occational ballet dancer. Outdoor explorations include hiking and backpacking, the Pacific Northwest is beautiful and filled with enless adventures. |
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| <img alt="Frankie throw with Logan" src="../images/flying.jpg"> |
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I believe img tags need a title attribute for accessibility that describes what the image is.
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Overall great responsiveness on your site -- this image tends to shrink weirdly with narrow screens.
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| <h3><a>HOBBIES</a></h3> | ||
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| My extracurricular activities revolove around different types of adventures and vulnerability to trying new things |
| National Jitterbug Championships 2015 | Amateur Lindy Finals | Lloyd Lopez & Theresa Manney | ||
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| <iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/Ngku1TFxxhw?rel=0" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe> |
| </section> | ||
| <section id="code-projects"> | ||
| <article> | ||
| <h4><a href="https://github.com/TheresaManney/ride-share-two">Ride Share | Ruby</a></h4> |
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I have no standing to recommend this, because I didn't do it myself on my own static site, but I have a suggestion on these links to your Github repos! Edit the README to remove the information about the assignment and include more about your particular version. This is a super-simple way to help readers (and future employers) see what you've done on a project.
For instance -- my capstone README here: https://github.com/laurenfb/knitsights. (Obviously no need to write that long, of course!)
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| <h4>Dogs ♥</h4> | ||
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| Dogs have been a part of my whole life. My dad always trained our family dogs to be suitible hunting dogs. This his dog training influence, I have always had a passion towards training and caring for dogs. This has lead me to be the neighborhood dog walker ever since I was in middle school. I currently walk dogs as a side job along with caring for other animals. Pictured above is the newest adition to my family, Stella Bear. |
| <li><a href="https://twitter.com/theresa_manney"> | ||
| <img alt="Round Twitter Logo" src="../images/round-twitter.png"></a> | ||
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| <li><a href="theresa.m.17(at)gmail.com"> |
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FYI this link doesn't work -- I think a mailto:theresa.m.17@gmail.com would do the trick!
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I think this file could be DRYed up a little bit -- a lot of things seems to overlap.
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Hi Lauren,
Thank you for the wonderful constructive criticism!
…-Theresa
On Thu, Mar 30, 2017 at 2:19 PM, Lauren Fries Brink < ***@***.***> wrote:
***@***.**** commented on this pull request.
Great job with this site Theresa! I really like the simple design and your
index.html page is lovely. The CSS image slider on the hobbies page is
especially cool.
I corrected typos, but if those don't bother you, then please feel free to
ignore :) In terms of things to work on, DRYing up your CSS (and perhaps
HTML as well) will help you target elements more specifically. I suggested
a few things for accessibility purposes as well.
If you have questions please feel free to email me at
***@***.***!
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In html/about.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + </head>
+
+ <body>
+ <header>
+ <h2><a href="index.html"> Theresa Manney </a></h2>
+ <nav>
+ <ul>
+ <li><a href="hobby-blog.html">HOBBIES</a></li>
+ <li><a href="portfolio.html">PORTFOLIO</a></li>
+ <li><a href="about.html">ABOUT</a></li>
+ </ul>
+ </nav>
+ </header>
+ <main>
+ <section>
+ <h3><a>ABOUT ME</a></h3>
Where does this <a> tag lead to? Generally it's best practice to include
an href with an a -- see Rule 10 here
<https://www.sitepoint.com/15-rules-making-accessible-links/>.
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In html/about.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + </nav>
+ </header>
+ <main>
+ <section>
+ <h3><a>ABOUT ME</a></h3>
+ <p>
+ Software Development Student <strong>•</strong> Dancer <strong>•</strong> Outdoor Enthusiast
+ </p>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <article>
+ <p>
+ I was accepted into Ada Developers Accademy, Cohort 7 in November 2016. Before applying, I taught myself some basice coding fundimentals all while continuing community college courses and working at least 3 odd jobs.
+ </p>
+ <p>
+ When I'm not coding, you can expect me to be dancing or exploring the outdoors. I am an avid lindy hopper and occational ballet dancer. Outdoor explorations include hiking and backpacking, the Pacific Northwest is beautiful and filled with enless adventures.
enless --> endless :)
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In html/about.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + <h3><a>ABOUT ME</a></h3>
+ <p>
+ Software Development Student <strong>•</strong> Dancer <strong>•</strong> Outdoor Enthusiast
+ </p>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <article>
+ <p>
+ I was accepted into Ada Developers Accademy, Cohort 7 in November 2016. Before applying, I taught myself some basice coding fundimentals all while continuing community college courses and working at least 3 odd jobs.
+ </p>
+ <p>
+ When I'm not coding, you can expect me to be dancing or exploring the outdoors. I am an avid lindy hopper and occational ballet dancer. Outdoor explorations include hiking and backpacking, the Pacific Northwest is beautiful and filled with enless adventures.
+ </p>
+ </article>
+ <article>
+ <img alt="Frankie throw with Logan" src="../images/flying.jpg">
I believe img tags need a title attribute for accessibility that
describes what the image is.
------------------------------
In html/hobby-blog.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + <body>
+ <header>
+ <h2><a href="index.html"> Theresa Manney </a></h2>
+ <nav>
+ <ul>
+ <li><a href="hobby-blog.html">HOBBIES</a></li>
+ <li><a href="portfolio.html">PORTFOLIO</a></li>
+ <li><a href="about.html">ABOUT</a></li>
+ </ul>
+ </nav>
+ </header>
+ <main>
+ <section>
+ <h3><a>HOBBIES</a></h3>
+ <p>
+ My extracurricular activities revolove around different types of adventures and vulnerability to trying new things
revolove --> revolve :)
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In html/hobby-blog.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + </header>
+ <main>
+ <section>
+ <h3><a>HOBBIES</a></h3>
+ <p>
+ My extracurricular activities revolove around different types of adventures and vulnerability to trying new things
+ </p>
+ </section>
+ <section id="hobbies">
+ <article id="dance">
+ <h4>Lindy Hop</h4>
+ <p class="info">
+ National Jitterbug Championships 2015 | Amateur Lindy Finals | Lloyd Lopez & Theresa Manney
+ </p>
+ <section>
+ <iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/Ngku1TFxxhw?rel=0" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>
Super cool!
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In html/hobby-blog.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + <p>
+ My extracurricular activities revolove around different types of adventures and vulnerability to trying new things
+ </p>
+ </section>
+ <section id="hobbies">
+ <article id="dance">
+ <h4>Lindy Hop</h4>
+ <p class="info">
+ National Jitterbug Championships 2015 | Amateur Lindy Finals | Lloyd Lopez & Theresa Manney
+ </p>
+ <section>
+ <iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/Ngku1TFxxhw?rel=0" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>
+ </section>
+
+ <p>
+ I was first introduced to Lindy Hop in 2009, the very end of my Sophmore year in high school. After seeing my first competition, I was hooked. I have been dancing competitively for the last three years. Along side swing dancing, I am also a member of Sister Kate Dance Company which is an all girls dance troup who specialize in vernacular jazz dancing. In the video to the left, I was included in an open source type dance project. Sasha and Idalia chorographed the piece and created break down videos so that other people could learn the choreography easier if they so wish.
Sophmore --> sophomore :)
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In html/portfolio.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + <li><a href="about.html">ABOUT</a></li>
+ </ul>
+ </nav>
+ </header>
+ <main>
+ <section>
+ <h3><a>PORTFOLIO</a></h3>
+ <p>
+ Projects I have completed and strive to improve on
+ </p>
+ </section>
+ <section id="code-projects">
+ <article>
+ <h4><a href="https://github.com/TheresaManney/ride-share-two">Ride Share | Ruby</a></h4>
+ <p class="date">
+ Latest-update: 3.14.17
I like this addition of latest update! The further you get into Ada, the
less you update your portfolio -- so this is a good way to let the reader
know when you updated.
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In html/portfolio.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + <li><a href="hobby-blog.html">HOBBIES</a></li>
+ <li><a href="portfolio.html">PORTFOLIO</a></li>
+ <li><a href="about.html">ABOUT</a></li>
+ </ul>
+ </nav>
+ </header>
+ <main>
+ <section>
+ <h3><a>PORTFOLIO</a></h3>
+ <p>
+ Projects I have completed and strive to improve on
+ </p>
+ </section>
+ <section id="code-projects">
+ <article>
+ <h4><a href="https://github.com/TheresaManney/ride-share-two">Ride Share | Ruby</a></h4>
I have no standing to recommend this, because I didn't do it myself on my
own static site, but I have a suggestion on these links to your Github
repos! Edit the README to remove the information about the assignment and
include more about your particular version. This is a super-simple way to
help readers (and future employers) see what you've done on a project.
For instance -- my capstone README here: https://github.com/laurenfb/
knitsights. (Obviously no need to write that long, of course!)
------------------------------
In html/about.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + </head>
+
+ <body>
+ <header>
+ <h2><a href="index.html"> Theresa Manney </a></h2>
+ <nav>
+ <ul>
+ <li><a href="hobby-blog.html">HOBBIES</a></li>
+ <li><a href="portfolio.html">PORTFOLIO</a></li>
+ <li><a href="about.html">ABOUT</a></li>
+ </ul>
+ </nav>
+ </header>
+ <main>
+ <section>
+ <h3><a>ABOUT ME</a></h3>
(I see a few others like this as well, just FYI)
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In html/hobby-blog.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + "We Know How To Do It" | Choreography by Sasha Anderson and Idalia Ramos | Open Source Project
+ </p>
+ </article>
+ <article id="backpacking">
+ <h4>Backpacking</h4>
+ <h2>Places I've explored:</h2>
+ <ul>
+ <li>The Enchantments, WA</li>
+ <li>Hoh Rainforest, WA</li>
+ <li>Bryce Canyon, UT</li>
+ </ul>
+ </article>
+ <article id="dogs">
+ <h4>Dogs ♥</h4>
+ <p>
+ Dogs have been a part of my whole life. My dad always trained our family dogs to be suitible hunting dogs. This his dog training influence, I have always had a passion towards training and caring for dogs. This has lead me to be the neighborhood dog walker ever since I was in middle school. I currently walk dogs as a side job along with caring for other animals. Pictured above is the newest adition to my family, Stella Bear.
suitible --> suitable :)
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In html/hobby-blog.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + </article>
+ </section>
+ </main>
+ <footer>
+ <section>
+ <ul>
+ <li><a href="https://github.com/TheresaManney">
+ <img alt="Round Github Logo" src="../images/round-github.png"></a>
+ </li>
+ <li><a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/theresamanney/">
+ <img alt="Round LinkedIn Logo" src="../images/round-linkedin.png"></a>
+ </li>
+ <li><a href="https://twitter.com/theresa_manney">
+ <img alt="Round Twitter Logo" src="../images/round-twitter.png"></a>
+ </li>
+ <li><a href="theresa.m.17(at)gmail.com">
FYI this link doesn't work -- I think a ***@***.***
would do the trick!
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In html/index.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + <link rel="stylesheet" href="../styles/normalize.css" />
+ <link rel="stylesheet" href="../styles/main.css" />
+ </head>
+
+ <body>
+ <header>
+ <h1>WELCOME!</h1>
+ <nav>
+ <ul>
+ <li><a href="about.html"> About </a></li>
+ </ul>
+ </nav>
+ </header>
+ <main>
+ <section>
+ <img alt="Picture of me and Lloyd dancing" src="../images/green-shirt.jpg">
This is such a cool photo!
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In html/about.html
<#26 (comment)>:
> + <h3><a>ABOUT ME</a></h3>
+ <p>
+ Software Development Student <strong>•</strong> Dancer <strong>•</strong> Outdoor Enthusiast
+ </p>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <article>
+ <p>
+ I was accepted into Ada Developers Accademy, Cohort 7 in November 2016. Before applying, I taught myself some basice coding fundimentals all while continuing community college courses and working at least 3 odd jobs.
+ </p>
+ <p>
+ When I'm not coding, you can expect me to be dancing or exploring the outdoors. I am an avid lindy hopper and occational ballet dancer. Outdoor explorations include hiking and backpacking, the Pacific Northwest is beautiful and filled with enless adventures.
+ </p>
+ </article>
+ <article>
+ <img alt="Frankie throw with Logan" src="../images/flying.jpg">
Overall great responsiveness on your site -- this image tends to shrink
weirdly with narrow screens.
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> @@ -0,0 +1,81 @@
+html {
I think this file could be DRYed up a little bit -- a lot of things seems
to overlap.
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