diff --git a/docs/mcp/approve-from-your-assistant.mdx b/docs/mcp/approve-from-your-assistant.mdx
index b183f03..0f49320 100644
--- a/docs/mcp/approve-from-your-assistant.mdx
+++ b/docs/mcp/approve-from-your-assistant.mdx
@@ -35,24 +35,23 @@ and `--stdio` is that server:
 }
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-The core install is enough; the operator imports nothing from an extra. `CTRLRUN_CONFIG` names
-the policy your agents run against, and the store is found beside it.
+The core install is enough. `CTRLRUN_CONFIG` names the policy your agents run against, and the
+store is found beside it.
 
 It opens no socket. The approver is the **account the process runs as**, read from the real
-uid and from nothing the client sends or sets: not the environment, not `clientInfo`, not
-`SUDO_USER`. Answers are recorded as `mcp-operator:<your login>` with the issuer
-`os-login:<host>`, so the evidence says how the answer arrived. Two things to know before you
-rely on it:
+uid and from nothing the client sends or sets. Answers are recorded as `mcp-operator:<your
+login>` with the issuer `os-login:<host>`, so the evidence says how the answer arrived. Two
+things to know first:
 
 - **The login has no expiry.** This process holds `approve`, `deny` and `resolve` under your
   name for as long as it runs, so the confirmation your client shows before a write is the human
   step. Leave it on for these three tools.
-- **Root is an account, not a person.** Under `sudo` or in a container running as root, every
-  write is refused and reads still answer.
+- **Root is an account, not a person.** Under `sudo` or as root in a container, writes are
+  refused and reads still answer.
 
-A login carries no roles, so a control that names an `approver_role` refuses over stdio. It
-takes no header, JWT or origin flag; each is refused by name, because a flag that cannot take
-effect is a flag you would believe took effect.
+A login carries no roles, so a control naming an `approver_role` refuses over stdio. Header,
+JWT and origin flags are refused by name: a flag that cannot take effect is one you would
+believe took effect.
 
 ## Start it behind a proxy