diff --git a/public/favicon-16.png b/public/favicon-16.png
new file mode 100644
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diff --git a/public/favicon-32.png b/public/favicon-32.png
new file mode 100644
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diff --git a/scripts/verify-build.mjs b/scripts/verify-build.mjs
index 6cdbe8b..648d3c9 100644
--- a/scripts/verify-build.mjs
+++ b/scripts/verify-build.mjs
@@ -52,6 +52,8 @@ const REQUIRED_STATIC = [
   'robots.txt',
   'og-default.png',
   'favicon.ico',
+  'favicon-16.png',
+  'favicon-32.png',
   'sitemap-index.xml',
 ];
 
diff --git a/src/components/CopyCommand.astro b/src/components/CopyCommand.astro
index 25880dc..8c4cbff 100644
--- a/src/components/CopyCommand.astro
+++ b/src/components/CopyCommand.astro
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ const { display, copy = display, prompt = true } = Astro.props;
       if (status) status.textContent = 'Copied to clipboard';
     } catch {
       button.textContent = 'Press ⌘C';
-      if (status) status.textContent = 'Copy failed — press Control or Command + C';
+      if (status) status.textContent = 'Copy failed. Press Control or Command + C instead.';
     }
     window.setTimeout(() => {
       button.textContent = 'Copy';
diff --git a/src/data/fit.ts b/src/data/fit.ts
index ba551e7..9b689a0 100644
--- a/src/data/fit.ts
+++ b/src/data/fit.ts
@@ -116,14 +116,14 @@ export const QUESTIONS: readonly Question[] = [
   {
     id: 'mac',
     question: 'Do you have a Mac, or a way to get one?',
-    help: "This is the big one. BlueBubbles needs a Mac signed in to iMessage to do the actual talking — there's no way around it.",
+    help: "This is the big one. BlueBubbles needs a Mac signed in to iMessage to do the actual talking, and there is no way around it.",
     choices: [
       { id: 'have', label: 'Yes, I have a Mac', tone: 'good' },
       {
         id: 'buy',
         label: 'I could pick up a cheap old one',
         tone: 'good',
-        note: 'A second-hand Mac mini is the usual route. It does not need to be fast — it only relays messages.',
+        note: 'A second-hand Mac mini is the usual route. It only relays messages, so it does not need to be fast.',
       },
       {
         id: 'vm',
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ export const QUESTIONS: readonly Question[] = [
         reason: 'the Mac belongs to a school or employer',
         tone: 'warn',
         blocks: true,
-        note: 'Probably not for you. BlueBubbles needs Full Disk Access and, for the extra features, a helper installed into Messages. Managed Macs usually block both — and doing it anyway may well breach the device policy you agreed to. Use a personal Mac instead.',
+        note: 'Probably not for you. BlueBubbles needs Full Disk Access and, for the extra features, a helper installed into Messages. Managed Macs usually block both, and doing it anyway may well breach the device policy you agreed to. Use a personal Mac instead.',
       },
     ],
   },
@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ export interface Verdict {
 export const VERDICTS: Record<Verdict['id'], Verdict> = {
   yes: {
     id: 'yes',
-    title: 'Yes — this is built for you',
+    title: 'Yes, this is built for you',
     blurb: 'You have what BlueBubbles needs, and none of the usual blockers. Install the server on your Mac, then the app wherever you want to read your messages.',
   },
   maybe: {
diff --git a/src/layouts/BaseLayout.astro b/src/layouts/BaseLayout.astro
index f2a2531..8d880f0 100644
--- a/src/layouts/BaseLayout.astro
+++ b/src/layouts/BaseLayout.astro
@@ -43,7 +43,12 @@ const { title, description, keywords, path, ogImage, ogType, noindex } = Astro.p
     <Font cssVariable="--font-inter" preload />
     <Seo {title} {description} {keywords} {path} {ogImage} {ogType} {noindex} />
 
-    <link rel="icon" href="/favicon.ico" sizes="48x48" />
+    {/* sizes="any" on the .ico: it holds 16, 24, 32 and 48px entries, and the
+        old markup claimed 48x48, which stopped browsers choosing the right one
+        for a tab. The PNGs are crisper where a browser prefers them. */}
+    <link rel="icon" href="/favicon.ico" sizes="any" />
+    <link rel="icon" type="image/png" sizes="32x32" href="/favicon-32.png" />
+    <link rel="icon" type="image/png" sizes="16x16" href="/favicon-16.png" />
     <link rel="apple-touch-icon" href="/apple-touch-icon.png" />
     <slot name="head" />
   </head>
diff --git a/src/pages/is-it-for-me/index.astro b/src/pages/is-it-for-me/index.astro
index 7f52ce0..c8ffec2 100644
--- a/src/pages/is-it-for-me/index.astro
+++ b/src/pages/is-it-for-me/index.astro
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ import { LINKS, SITE } from '@data/site';
 >
   <PageHeader
     title="Is BlueBubbles a good fit for me?"
-    lead={`${QUESTIONS.length} questions. No email address, nothing sent anywhere — it all runs in your browser. We'll tell you if the answer is no.`}
+    lead={`${QUESTIONS.length} questions, answered in your browser. No email address, and nothing is sent anywhere. We'll tell you if the answer is no.`}
   />
 
   <div class="mx-auto max-w-2xl px-5 py-12">